While many people go to the university for academic study, more people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers. Do you agree or disagree?
Due to the shortage of qualified workers, more people should do vocational training instead of pursuing academic studies. I strongly agree with it since vocational training offers more practicality.
One reason is that career-oriented training is more practical for society’s working demands. Not only does vocational school secure a job when a person applies TO that school, but right after graduating, trainees would have a handful of experiences to work in practice. Since graduates from university need more time to intern before they can face real-life work, meanwhile, people with vocational training would start immediately after getting that job. Therefore, with the high demand, employers are more likely to prefer the latter because they do not need to train them as this helps reduce the time required for apprenticeships.
Another reason is that vocational training provides an opportunity for students to earn while they learn. Admittedly, going to university is advantageous, but not all people can afford the tuition fee and thereby, vocational education is a better option. Most career-oriented schools allegedly allow students to learn and work simultaneously. This means they can both build UP their savings and have hands-on skills and knowledge after the training. For instance, vocational trainees can spend half their day learning theory and skills while they can do a part-time job for the rest of the day. Consequently, they will have a certificate for their study and also a stable position in the labor market because they already have skillful experience.
In conclusion, universities are helpful environments for academic study. However, I firmly believe doing vocational education would be a better choice if one desires to have applicable skills and build UP personal savings while in their training period.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46666666667 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98558349967 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2304156262 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.285714286 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288869195835 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107278374896 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077523681375 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204211783712 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704930705594 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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