You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The diagram below shows how glass is recycled Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram below shows how glass is recycled.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

The provided diagram gives an illustration of the glass recycling process.
Overall, there are three main stages involved in the fabrication of renewing glass products including the used glass collection, the industrial process, and the delivery to retail outlets.
The first stage is collecting glass from household or office recycle bins. Following that, the glass collection is transported to the treatment plan, preparing for the following processed stages.
The second stage begins with cleaning and sterilizing the glass in designated machines. These objects are then crushed and melted at high temperatures. After that, the recycled glass is transformed into liquid which is ready for the moulding stage. Afterward, this liquid is poured into a mold, allowing it to form customized shapes after cooling.
In the final stage, the new products are ready for different purposes and available for sale in supermarkets or shops. The process can be considered a closed loop as the cycle of glass products starts again at the same place where it begins.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 892.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3734939759 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75553521242 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656626506024 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2081861548 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 5.23603664747 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107021092686 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04572923512 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0279446343609 0.0843802449381 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0656243316666 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195961405584 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.06136585366 123% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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