While many people go to university for academic study, more people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers. Do you agree or disagree?
Majority of students prefer to study at college for get academic knowledge, however most of people should be fuelled to join some practicing with the reason every single person shortage by qualified employe which is like person expert of electricity and pipe. I completely disagree with this opinion and think that each person sholud be developing their academic science for advance a country.
First of all, many companies requiring of worker with the high value. In other words, for creating different personality someone must have some criteria, because to rise development of some council every employment should be expert in one field. Moreover, all knowledge about it will get in university, because in here we can establish our mental and our confidence therefore to focus with what we keen, nowdays almost all offices in Indonesia have a qualify for receives trade and one of the most provision is bachelor degree. For instance, leading firm in Indonesia open recruitment for inhabitants as staff finance in Banking Industry, while to working in there every person should be advance in that field foremost in Banking and the requirement is students from finance/banking graduate. That's why study academic very crucial for getting job in modern era.
Secondly, for educate our descendent to reach the best future in life. Several people have a mindset for make their children smart, brave, have a bright life and for get all of them their parrents should be know about anything especially in science. Furthermore, through the high education can be motivates their children to keep spirit for indicating their way because majority of children will see what their parrents do. For example, in Aceh, majority of parents only study at senior high school and can't continue to university because of lack the financial but they want to be a good parents and want give their children happiness and some children will think to lift level of their family, they should be a success person in the future and for achieve it they start by school at primary school until get some title in their name and after completed their study the opportunity to reach a best job more than easy. Thus, the higher education will determine a future of someone.
To conclude, life in modern era with the biggest sophistication all people should be supposed to have the highest education and minimum level is in bachelor degree, all of them can give benefit for country because have quality human resources and able to give a great influence in advancing the country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 85, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...ege for get academic knowledge, however most of people should be fuelled to join some practici...
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Line 2, column 449, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ys almost all offices in Indonesia have a qualify for receives trade and one of the most ...
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Line 2, column 688, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'advanced'?
Suggestion: advanced
...working in there every person should be advance in that field foremost in Banking and t...
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Line 2, column 793, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...students from finance/banking graduate. Thats why study academic very crucial for get...
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Line 3, column 207, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'known'?
Suggestion: known
...et all of them their parrents should be know about anything especially in science. F...
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Line 3, column 503, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ts only study at senior high school and cant continue to university because of lack ...
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Line 3, column 891, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ed their study the opportunity to reach a best job more than easy. Thus, the high...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2124.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 423.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02127659574 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58060538804 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517730496454 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 682.2 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 119.952949356 49.4020404114 243% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 163.384615385 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5384615385 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4615384615 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219771920949 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786550497665 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035364895956 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132868473844 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254213885627 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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