While people in developing countries are happier than in the past, people in developed countries are less happy. Why? What can be learnt from this?
it is a well-known fact that citizens in developing countries are happier than in the past, citizens in developed countries are less happy. This problem is caused by some factors and it should be dealt with by some effective solutions. There are two primary reasons that nowadays, public in developing countries, people feel less pressure about economy. For example, when economic wealth, the quality of life will be improved compare to in the past, meet the needs of people, they can have more opportunities to find a great job, then leading to ability to pay for electric bill, modern equipment, so on, they will feel satisfied about their life. Secondly, the gap between wealth people and poor people increased significantly. For example, people who inherent poor, they have to become a criminal, this can be endangered with person who have excess property, the criminal can do anything to as achieve their aims, even killed, so that people need to be careful in any case, have to find the way to protect themselves, therefore they do not feel happiness. Feasible solutions should be produced to tackle these aforementioned problems so that everyone can enjoy their life in both developed and developing nations. One approach is the government need to support a small subsidies for poor dwellers. For instance, the government subsidies a small money so that poor people can survive day by day until their financial sustainability or prompt to build more facilities, improving the quality of education, then poor people can gain some benefits to build their financial, therefore can decrease the amount of crime. Another strategy is to encourage the citizens balance between work and life. For example, there are several activities or club of health such as take meditation, ride a bike in the forest to breath clear air-condition so that people can relax their mind after many hours working hard, therefore feel less pressure and joyful in daily life. In conclusion, a host of root causes behind people less happy compare to the past can be identified. Practical measures are available to reverse the situation
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in any case
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1766.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07471264368 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7186338012 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545977011494 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.2044174704 49.4020404114 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.846153846 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7692307692 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31804457582 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114584717543 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102624001166 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.31804457582 0.151304729494 210% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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