Why are some people who leave school early more successful compared with those who complete their studies.
Provide reasons why they are more successful and what are the requirement for success?
Nowadays, instead of continuing their learning, people tend to leave their schools to start their lives because of more early success than others who complete their studies. There are some reasons and requirements to encourage them to give up their schools and enter their real lives.
people receive more success than other people because of a lot of experiences they gain at a young age and their passion for work. students in colleges or universities only learn background knowledge and lack soft-skill, which is essential in modern society. The employers will choose people with many soft skills to serve their customers instead of students with a high degree but no experience. people who enter their lives usually know what they need and what they are doing to get a goal for their life. Therefore, sometimes, they will succeed early. Of course, their chosen roads are not easy for them because they must discover themselves without the instructor or teachers.
it is believed that when starting any work if people have much experience in fields, it is advantageous. Meanwhile, students in school only experience the thesis in books and do not have a chance to train real-life activities. This reason affects the success in their life compared to people who give up school.
To sum up, I would say that many people choose to leave their education to gain valuable experience of their career choice. Additionally, possessing qualities like being tactful and endeavours result in success in a career.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, while, of course, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12096774194 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61910603856 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596774193548 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.505371652 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.6923076923 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0769230769 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92307692308 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370707727494 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126756297502 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107668366723 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221682249159 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811152769245 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.