Why children rebel against their parents
The relationship between parents and their kids must be the strongest bond; however, it is not usually like that. Sometime are rebellious against their parents because of some different reasons.
The first reason is the children’s changes during puberty period which is a phase of mature. Adolescence is an important stage to change between childhood and adulthood. In this period, apart from physical development, children also go through psychological, social and emotional changes. These tremendous changes make them become oversensitive; therefore, they feel irritated, angry, confused and lost. This leads to their rebellion against their parents. In fact, in this period teenagers not only have the need of assert their opinion strongly but also want to have decisions by themselves whereas their parents are overprotective towards the kids and want to keep an eye for whatever their kids do. Aas a result, there are a lot of conflict between them.
The second cause is high expectation of parents about what their kids will be. Parents always have dreams of their children’s success. It is popular that they want their kids to have good manners and get high grades at schools or achieve a qualification which the children do not like. Consequently, they do not get on well with each other and the kids trend to oppose against their parents. For example, when a kid has want to become a teacher but their parents push them to take part in Medical University, the outcome is that the child rebels against them by not doing well at the university perhap not attending classes.
Finally, rebellion is one way which children do to seek for attention of their parents. Indeed, currently most parents are busy with their career so they do not spend a lot of time on taking care of children. This makes kids be lonely and vulnerable, thus they rebel against their parents with hope that they will be looked after more.
In conclusion, there are some main reasons for children’s rebellion against their parents including changes during adolescence, high expectation of parents about their children and drawing parents’ attention. From my perspective, parents should try to understand their children more, listening to their opinion, share their difficulties as well as emotion and spend more time for them to prevent from unwanted conflicts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, however, if, look, second, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, apart from, for example, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1927.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0445026178 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55873280472 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486910994764 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 382.0 20.2975951904 1882% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1927.0 106.682146367 1806% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 382.0 20.7667163134 1839% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 176.0 7.06120827912 2492% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.456514133645 0.244688304435 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.456514133645 0.084324248473 541% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.31019979627 0.151304729494 205% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628584532429 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 193.3 13.0946893788 1476% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -307.79 50.2224549098 -613% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 151.1 11.3001002004 1337% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.43 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 25.6 8.58950901804 298% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 58.0 9.78957915832 592% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 154.8 10.1190380762 1530% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 58.0 10.7795591182 538% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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