What are effects of water pollution nowadays?
there is the truth that today the polluted environment especially water pollution is becoming serious. In fact, water contamination causes some mainly harmful impacts such as human health problems, the underdevelopment of corps and decline of water organism.
In the first place, contaminated water has been responsible for some dangerous diseases. Obviously, polluted water may contain lots of harmful bacteria; therefore, it may cause digestive problems such as diarrhea and vomit. In addition, researchers in national institute of the environment demonstrated that some hazardous elements in polluted water such as arsenic, lead and mercury can cause cancer. Moreover, using contaminated water in daily life brings about skin problems like dermatitis, allergy and acne. According to a report from national Dermatology institute, 90 percent of patients suffering from chronic skin diseases due to using polluted water.
The second effect of polluted water is the underdevelopment of crops. it is clear that, plants irrigated by contaminated water were difficult to develop. Mr. John Smith, a professor from researching start of the environment in New York, gave a typical example, which is situation of bananas. he said that bananas could not bear their fruits if they were irrigated by polluted water. he added, the main reason was that phenolic compounds, which were poisonous chemicals in contaminated water, stimulated development process of banana.
Finally, contamination of water results in decline water organism. like human, animals need water for their life. if they drink polluted water or live in this kind of water they may die. For instance, in 2019 the mass of fish in West lake were killed because they lived in polluted water there. After that, the government had to invest money to clean the water of this lake. Since then, the similar situation of fish has not happened.
In conclusion, it is evident that there are some chiefly harmful consequences of polluted water including harmful effects on human health, undeveloped crops and decreased animals in water. therefore, some practical and effective solutions should be taken to tackle the problem as soon as possible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, may, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, such as, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1878.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5073313783 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88320953209 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568914956012 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.6010100881 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.05 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352543033287 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128167527175 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0895740923551 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223683348812 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0174105168636 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.