Why criminals commit crimes, whey they set free from the prison? What are the causes of this case? What are the solutions??
It is fact that the majority of offenders who come out from the jail, likely to do crime again, because of certain circumstances. In this essay I will discuss the reasons behind this situation, also some primitive steps, which could be helpful to overcome it.
There are several reasons why some criminals are trying to do crime, after leaving from the prison. Firstly, prison may act as a university for soft criminals. By this I mean, small criminals, like shoplifter, pickpocket and many more, can enable themselves to learn new tricks and techniques of doing crimes from other prisoners, therefore they are willing to use those methods in real life. Secondly, the mindset of the employers. In other words, nowadays, employers are hiring only those candidates who do not have any criminal record, thus criminals not able to get a job. Therefore, to fulfill their daily expenses, they encourage themselves to do crime. According to survey, in India, 50% of premier commits crime again, because they cannot hire by any employers.
The solutions are not simple. To begin with, the regime can play an essential role. What I mean to say by this is that, it is proven that the main cause of crime is lack of education, therefore the law enforcement agencies should provide a free education as well as vocational training to criminals in the jail, it would be helpful to them in the future, to earn some money. Furthermore, the government should make a criminal quota or some relief skims for companies. In other words, the higher authorities reserved some jobs or encourage firms to hire criminals, as they get benefits from it also. For instance, in the USA, there is one law that, if organization hire the offenders, then they get 5% relief in the taxation.
In conclusion, I reiterate that the criminals commit crimes after leaving the prison, because the jail may work as an educational institution for them and unable to get a job, however effective steps could be taken to reduce crime rate, as providing education and vocational training in the prison.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 594, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...criminals, as they get benefits from it also. For instance, in the USA, there is one...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for instance, i mean, in conclusion, as well as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91977077364 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6942661566 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561604584527 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 4.76152304609 294% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.6271859792 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.3125 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8125 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.375 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27828661093 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783681163937 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555850881495 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148814583405 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443106277005 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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