Will modern technology, such as the internet ever replace the book or the written word as the main source of information?
It is true that modern information and technology has developed rapidly nowadays. From that internet plays an essential role in modern society by giving information. That’s why many people predict it will replace the books and other written media to the internet in the future. I would agree that the number of books and magazines will reduce significantly, but some of them will continue in the same way as school textbook and dictionaries in the future.
To begin with, I believe human beings always keen to move to changes. In the ancient era, people used to write on walls and tree leaves and then it slowly changes to writing on the papers and finally became the books and newspapers. But nowadays people engaged with the internet to get the information because of it more easy to log in and saving time. For example, if someone want to get the daily news they can simply explore on the web browser and get the world news like CNN, BBC and other local news stations. Also it is always easy to watch the news or documentary on internet rather than reading the newspaper or magazines. When we searching something on internet there are lot of information comes from different web sites which can be more easy to understand clearly and read at one place. Moreover getting information on the internet is really helpful to school children and university students when they studying their Assignments and projects.
On the flip side, using the internet has some disadvantages as well. Some times we will misguide or will get the wrong information from the internet. For example, there is a lot of scam website which can be harmful to children’s mental and misguide to people to purchase the wrong books or other articles. Sometimes it's not easy to connect to the internet wherever we want and we always need to contact with electricity run the computers. However, reading a storybook can give us a more entertain as well from imagine the storyline while reading and it’s better for our eyes rather than reading through the computer screen.
Overall, I believe that we are moving on to the new technology by using the internet to get the information in the future. However, books and other reading materials will not disappear because they are the media we used in our leisure time and the main tool for our education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 378, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...nd saving time. For example, if someone want to get the daily news they can simply e...
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Line 5, column 516, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...CNN, BBC and other local news stations. Also it is always easy to watch the news or ...
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Line 5, column 800, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...derstand clearly and read at one place. Moreover getting information on the internet is ...
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Line 9, column 173, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun scam seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of scams'.
Suggestion: a lot of scams
...rom the internet. For example, there is a lot of scam website which can be harmful to childre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, moreover, really, so, then, well, while, for example, it is true, to begin with, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1948.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8578553616 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62770009817 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498753117207 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 613.8 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2854773743 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.222222222 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2777777778 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214667794726 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756624208717 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614944882279 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151316659928 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744863236384 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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