The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree?
The statement claims that staff should provide longer weekends by shorting the working days in a week. Although there are some negative consequences of this development, I agree with this statement. The lengthy holidays in every week can alleviate stress and depression, boost efficiency, and strengthen work-life balance.
There are several advantages of longer weekends. First of all, it enhances the efficiency of the worker. Efficacy is the most essential element in focusing the work. Constant work can hamper their mental health and decline productivity. As a result, the company can't get the best output from its staff. For example, the Walton group in Bangladesh increased and made the weekend from one day to two days per week. After a month, the data they got, was surprising. All of the tasks, workers completed and submitted before the deadline and the company's profits escalated significantly.
Second, the lengthy holidays can help the workers improve their work-life balance which can make them more productive and fresh. For this reason, they can focus on work properly and help to reduce the stress.
However, there are some drawbacks of making the weekend lengthy. Firstly, it increases the workload pressure as they need to complete all tasks in fewer days in a week. Additionally, it has some economic impacts on both industry and employees. To cite an example, shorter work hours affect the employees who get paid based on hourly. Furthermore, it makes the industry less productive as it doesn't run every day due to weekends. So it is more likely industry can't go to the maximum production. This will be more challenging for the company.
In conclusion, laborers are the main assets of the industry. Their efficiency and productivity can assist in thriving rapidly. So the company should focus more on its staff. To go for the maximum production, it can recruit more employees rather than increase pressure on existing fewer staff.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, so, then, for example, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16037735849 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73557614485 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575471698113 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0559960576 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.375 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.25 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.70833333333 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190551507029 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486267354553 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605215557937 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104049500457 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623441600242 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.76 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.