The working week should be shorter and workers should have longer weekend.
Do you agree or disagree?
In some countries, workers have to work during the week with high time working during the week. According to some, the government should set a rule to time working reduce and have a longer weekend. I think if workers work beneficially in their shifts and their employers and bosses have a satisfying sense about them, they should have a longer weekend.
On the one hand, the average time working in the whole work is around eight hours, and workers, employees, and so on have to work. But some work such as monitoring experts may have to fill your time shift around to eleven hours. These types of work should have longer weekends with enough salary. Not only can this make them have a good tendency to work better and improve their skills and abilities but it also, gives both a sense of security about their job and a good sense of their task. They think their duty is important for employers and bosses. For people who work on average time does not necessarily increase their weekend time off.
On the other hand, although in some projects and careers, you have to stay about twenty or more days in a month the remaining days in that month are your time off and you can go home. In some cases, you cannot have shorter work during the week because the project is not complete such as uranium enrichment. In this, you have to work more than other types and most of the time should stay back at work for a week. In such careers, you should have longer weekends and time off.
As a result, I think for careers which are not necessary and essential the employer can give their employees more time off.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 199, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
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Line 3, column 414, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...me should stay back at work for a week. In such careers, you should have longer we...
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...r weekends and time off. As a result, I think for careers which are not necessa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, i think, such as, as a result, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49657534247 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14916565743 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469178082192 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1078266066 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7857142857 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35311421736 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163326517258 0.084324248473 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116719268945 0.0667982634062 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226066604011 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.149337354811 0.056905535591 262% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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