It is generally accepted that technology spread its arms everywhere in the world and it changes our culture, social as well as our lifestyle. Computers are used everywhere like at work places, homes and so on. It is argued that different types of jobs are likely to be replaced by computer. I will discuss some jobs which are lost by computer along with problems.
To begin with, there are manifold jobs which are demolished by computer. First and foremost is teachers are being replaced by projector system in classroom and students prefer to learn from technology with interesting way. For instance, uno report says 75% of schools used advanced technology for learning new things in the classroom which effects the lost of teacher position in the future. Thus a child became addicted to learn from technology which increase the usage of computer more as compared to past. Next, the position of sale service, management, retail sales person and accountant may be lost on account of computer. After this, jobs of postmen are also endanger cause of emails which is most prefer by people nowadays also position of cashier in supermarket as more folks give money through credit card and pay bill by check.
There are multifarious problems that are introducing by enrollment of computers. Firstly, the introduction of computers increase the rate of unemployment. For example, technology take the position of people and they lost their jobs by computers. Lastly, people commit crimes as they have free from their work and for livelihood they have to do such things like robbery. Thus, crime will be on the peak due to unemployment.
To conclude, as there are some jobs which are done only by people so authority have to put some steps to increase that jobs which are replaced by the computer so that they can earn money and live better life.
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- As the world becomes technologically advanced, computer are replacing more and more job. Describe some job positions that may be lost because of computers and discuss at least one problem that may result. 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, lastly, may, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93569131833 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60885666615 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527331189711 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1465455017 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9375 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312059219988 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960412712041 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590542512828 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179521446931 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494483555507 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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