The world has seen an enormous increase in flights for leisure, business, and commercial purposes around the world over recent years.
What do you think are the main advantages and disadvantages of such flights?
Do you think flights should be taxed more?
Thanks to the technological advancement in the transportation system, people in today’s world travel using an aeroplane to various place in the world for many purposes such as holiday, business and commercial purposes. This essay will clarify the merits as well as drawback of this phenomenon and providing an opinion as concluding view.
Several advantages can be derived from travelling using an aeroplane. First of all, people can travel around the world using tight-budget as many airlines provide affordable tickets to various destination. air Asia for instance, offers lower-cost economy tickets to almost well-known tourist destinations in the world. Therefore, all people can have joyful trips with low budgets. Moreover, this type of transportation is proven much safer compared to other modes of transportation because the plane system is designed and equipped using a high technology part. The recent report shows that the accident rate in air transportation is much lower compared to land transportations. It states that the probability of aeroplane meet to an aeroplane crash in the air is 1 to 1 million flight number. Thus, travellers can have an economic as well as a convenient journey.
Undoubtedly, there are several problems caused by the increasing number of people transport using aircraft. Firstly, an increasing number of planes in the air badly affected environment as the burned-fuel resulted from the aeroplane machines is directly released to the atmosphere. This result in the increase of carbon dioxide concentration in the atmosphere and polluting the air.
To sum up, people experience a wonderful as well as low-fare travel budget using air transportation system, however, this means of transportation cause gravest problem for the environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Air
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...onomic as well as a convenient journey. Undoubtedly, there are several problems ...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'cause the gravest'.
Suggestion: cause the gravest
..., however, this means of transportation cause gravest problem for the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, therefore, thus, well, for instance, such as, as well as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59489051095 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20497807955 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576642335766 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7590436522 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118160270322 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0430155121451 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396085188864 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.071165740025 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435690917241 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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