The world of work is rapidly changing and employees cannot depend on having the same work or the same work conditions for life. Discuss the possible causes and suggest ways to prepare for people to work in the future.
It is true that modern society is in a constant state of flux with manifold types of work. This has resulted in employees continuously seeking new work at different stages of life instead of depending on one job. In this essay, I am going to analyse the main reason why this is happening and propose several solutions to make people well prepared for the future.
The most obvious cause is the rapid growth of technology, with innovations, machines and tools being invented nearly every day to cater for human society. Many jobs have gradually become obsolete while many other positions are created to fulfil the need of the market. For example, one could happily depend on being a taxi driver to support themselves many years ago, but in the intermediate future, the invention of self-driving cars might threaten their livelihood. Another example can be seen in the field of health care. Robots are now used to perform surgeries and medical treatments, so doctors and nurses should not be assured that they are irreplaceable.
In order to become well adaptive, employees should be willing to embrace technology, learn foreign languages and accept their ignorance. It would be difficult, if not impossible, for one to work in modern workplaces without a rudimentary knowledge of computer literacy because of the ubiquitous use of computers all over the world. Similarly, as the world has gradually become a global village, it is necessary that the employee know more than one language so that they can increase their odds of finding employment. The ability to accept that we do not know anything also helps us to be ready to learn new things, making us well prepared to adapt to the mutation of society.
In conclusion, modern people do not depend on a single job for life because of the development of technology, and they need to embrace technology, learn foreign languages and be open to new experiences to prepare for the future.
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- It is more important for schoolchildren to learn about local history than world history To what extent to you agree or disagree 80
- Some people say that reading for pleasure helps develop imagination and better language skills than watching TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- This is the best tie to live due to the development of technology in communication and health To what extent do you agree with this statement 90
- Many people think that countries should import less food and produce more for their population. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, similarly, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97852760736 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73529690299 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576687116564 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.1435579945 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.846153846 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0769230769 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214780581179 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700894153148 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057660760418 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137381459134 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562874244126 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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