Write a 5-paragraph essay on the following topic (500 words)
Friends vs Family members
Throughout the course of our life, we may run across or become attached to dozens of people, yet there are two kinds of relationships that are deemed to be the most significant ones: family and friends. Even though they seem to be of the same magnitude, they seem to be different in some ways.
The most obvious difference is the shared blood. Because family members share the same blood, they will opt to get together and resolve their disagreements after a conflict or debate. Perhaps the notion of being a family motivates each family member to the decision to resolve the problems rather than to become estranged from each other. In contrast, when a couple of friends get into an argument, especially a serious debate, it is a different story. It is possible that they will grow antagonistic toward one another, or even worse, they will start to gossip behind each other’s backs and reveal one another’s secrets. This will assuredly cause many unforeseen outcomes, such as bullies or mental health disorders like depression.
The attitude towards family members and friends is the second notable distinction. When interacting with our family, we will probably get irritated more easily. Why? Our family, especially parents, feels like scolding and shouting at every single mistake we make. Worse, some members of our family attack us for no purpose other than to amuse themselves. Hence, our emotions prompt us to feel hostility towards our family. However, whenever something bad happens, for instance, we get into some trouble that brings us dozens of negative consequences, it is our family members that stand by and support us at all times, regardless of our shortcomings. Conversely, we may find strangers engaging and trustworthy when we first meet them because of their tact and humor. Undoubtedly, we take an instant liking to them and share our daily stories with them, then we might consider them close friends. In case they are good friends, they will maintain a healthy relationship with us everytime we encounter any problem. If they are not, congratulations! It's more likely that we'll lose some buddies. What is more, it is possible that all of our errors and secrets will be shared widely.
Family members and friends, particularly good friends, on the other hand, share the same trait: they are amicable and may maintain a long-term relationship with us throughout our lives. Admittedly, regardless of numerous challenges, difficulties, or arguments, we are prone to attach to family members after all, and we are also likely to attach to friends in the same way. Besides bad friends, there are a large number of good ones who are inclined to be on your side and support you whatsoever. Furthermore, certain friends will most likely become our soulmates and stick with us for the rest of our lives, much more like the way family does for us.
Whatever we think, friends and family members play a significant role in our lives, even though they are different in some ways, such as the shared blood and our attitude towards them. However, we must admit that our family members and good friends might be all kind-hearted people who are prone to become our soulmates and attach to us for the rest of our lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 406, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ame way. Besides bad friends, there are a large number of good ones who are inclined to be on you...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, conversely, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, second, so, then, well, after all, for instance, in contrast, such as, what is more, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 73.0 24.0651302605 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2699.0 1615.20841683 167% => OK
No of words: 544.0 315.596192385 172% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96139705882 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82947280553 4.20363070211 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66599068879 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 176.041082164 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477941176471 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 837.9 506.74238477 165% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 5.43587174349 350% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8105287302 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.96 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.76 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108052164852 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407487993912 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506356724988 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0771630657983 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329043106305 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.