Write an essay of around 350 words on the following topic.
Some people think that young people should choose their professions themselves. Others believe that their parents should choose for them.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In these days and age, young generations receive more opportunities to participate in many positions of their favourite fields. Putting this into discussion, a lot of people support the view that the young should select the professions themselves whereas some claim that the choosing ought to be given to parents due to their abundant experiences. From my personal perspective, young people deserve to decide his or her occupation and this essay will elaborate some arguements prior to making a final opinion.
On the first hand, having chances to pursue one own's career allows them to break free of social shackles and preconception, implicating that they deny conforming to a certain stereotype. It is mostly explained why some students nowadays have to struggle for following one own's passion, unlike at prior time the parents would be who to choose. By againsting prejudice compounded by family and surrounding relationships, young people become further courageous in perceiving which job could bring them satisfaction. Combined together, a majority of whom can be able to maintain desires until they accomplish all the goals, therefore building stronger confidence and energy for long-term process. Moreover, chasing a particular profession requires one's outmost efforts, which could be tantamount to providing chances for further knowledge on relevant respects.
On the flip side, it is indisputable that parents' role towards children is immense. Young people can freely pursue any occupation they are fond of, yet the advice from prior generations will be partly helpful in burdensome circumstances. Since parents have undergone these earlier, they appraise the children's choices much carefully. However, some families might still be bounded by obsolete ideology of greater generations, on wages and reputation some kinds of job can bring. This leads to plethora young deaths and severe friction among members. Other cases can gradually engage in pessimistically mental state such as feeling depressed or sluggish.
To recapitulate, a modern society is a society that let the young to choose his or her job without any prejudgement as man has rights deciding his own life. Besides, young people should also take parents' counsel to help improve competency skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, whereas, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1929.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48011363636 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93246639901 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650568181818 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0186219143 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.5625 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245567112225 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700187302779 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069136057434 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145939866093 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776301561969 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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