Nowadays, people have different views about whether students should learn art at school or not. Some people argues that art is not a prominent subject for students' academic performance. While the others think that art is a great way to improve students' creativity. The following paragraphs will discuss both opinions in detail.
Since the start of industrial era, more and more engineering jobs shows up. This trend pushes schools to encourage students to focus on practical knowledge such as science and math. They believe these subjects are the cornerstones needed for current students to have a competitive edge and have more job opportunities in the future.
In spite of previous argument, the opposing view argues that art are not limited to stimulate students' creativity and imagination but can also be a medium to discloses their ideas and feelings. Expressing their mind as a picture is a challenge for students. Aside from improvement in their creativity, learning arts provides children a chance to release their stress from their daily routines. Students suffering mental issues will undoubtedly not be able to learn effectively, by getting entertainment through art or music, it will release their tension and boost learning efficiency.
To summarize, I strongly believe that having students to learn art is a necessity and I fully support the argument that school should not remove art courses from the curriculum, otherwise children will lose the opportunity to explore their interest and release pressures. Furthermore, art also useful to let children maintain positive physical and mental health condition.
- Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both sides and your opinion. 78
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- Writing Task 2 (an essay)Some people think that children should learn to paint or draw at school. Others believe it is just a waste of time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 61
- Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both sides and your opinion. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ject for students academic performance. While the others think that art is a great wa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, while, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42519685039 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85869066956 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614173228346 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9609340276 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145216982981 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574432213949 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527481270854 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0965842897288 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07251273336 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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