You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Advertising is a very common feature of all our daily media. In fact, in most daily newspapers, advertizing makes up the majority of the content. Very large amounts of money are spent on advertizing. A television commercial can easily cost many thousands of dollars per second.
Write an essay to an educated reader to discuss the advantages and disadvantages of advertizing, Include reasons and any relevant examples to support your answer. You should write at least 250 words. Your response will be evaluated in terms of Task fulfillment, Organization, Vocabulary and Grammar.
In an ever-changing society, advertising has become a vital part of all our daily media. Many people argue that it brings many benefits to both customers and companies. Meanwhile, some individuals suggest that Tv ads also cause some drawbacks. Discussed below will shed light on the advantages and disadvantages of this subject.
To commence with, Advertisement is beneficial to not only customers but also the firms which produce the advertised products. Firstly, it offers customers a diversity of products and their comparative prices. As a result, people are able to choose the things that suit them the most. Moreover, by comparing the prices among different brands, consumers could opt for the goods having the most reasonable price and save a lot of money. Secondly, commercials help individuals better understand the quality and the main features of products. The reason is that by using dynamic video to introduce the ingredients in the product or hiring celebrities to talk about the benefits of products to people’s health, consumers can be more secure about the things they use. For instance, in order to encourage youngsters to play Angry Bird games, the producers have launched an advertising campaign that presents all the features the game has and everyone can see that now this game has a huge fan base.
On the other hand, TV ads also cause several disadvantages. To begin with, it makes people sometimes feel confused as they have too many options, and they find it difficult to have the most suitable one for their own. A watch is the epitome of the confusion advertising has brought to consumers, as there are tons of watch brands. Each one has its own features and colors, so it causes customers to face the dilemma of making up their minds. In addition, in some circumstances, advertising could influence children in a bad way. Since some advertising contents contain toxic activities or violence, it is detrimental to see such things
In conclusion, the above-mentioned factors have shown the pros and cons of advertising. Its drawbacks should seriously be taken into account. Besides, it is undeniable that commercials have contributed great profits to our country’s labor market.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1855.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15277777778 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93393170454 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591666666667 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2029799167 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6315789474 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9473684211 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73684210526 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13412377216 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0359518919094 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364527338835 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0732679778372 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250732430126 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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