You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Environmental issues have a massive impact on countries and the public. It is believed that these problems can only be tackled by the government and big organizations while individuals are unable to solve them. I partly agree with this viewpoint for several reasons and this essay will shed light on my opinion.
On the one hand, I attest that some issues require the government to take action but not individuals. Those are often serious and cross-border problems that demand the co-operation between different countries. For example, climate change and global warming occur in a large scale so that only the authority know how to deal with them. Furthermore, several types of contaminants such as radioactive are attributed to the weather or the location of a country, in which people cannot change anything about them. Such polutants are solely tackled by using cutting-edge technology produced by big organizations and top-notch scientists.
On the other hand, I opine that normal people like us still bear the responsibility for making the world green. Nowadays, there are a lot of environmental activists who raise their voice and give speeches about the problem. This can raise people's awareness about saving the environment by using eco-friendly products, taking out garbage in trash cans or economizing electric. For instance, Greta Thunberg, who is a renowned environmentalist coming from Sweden, successfully caused the decrease in carbon emissions in America and Chinese for giving a touching speech about going green. Moreover, it is also a good idea to for celebrities to endorse green products and volunteer in environmental activities, which can positively influence the masses due to their popularity.
In conclusion, some people deny the responsibility of individuals 'contribution to the environment and only trust the government in lessening these issues. Nevertheless, I address that not only the authority, but also each person can make every possible effort to make the world greener.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42038216561 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1054401246 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605095541401 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3417600014 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.466666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208642807355 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607764798681 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423703551262 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122964785192 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377438635728 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.