You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems?
Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words.
In the contemporary era with the industry revolution large amount of people relocate to huge and developed cities.With this relocations caused some kind of problems.Such as traffics,increased of crime or pollutions.However,if the goverments want to change and arrange to this situtaion they can via new regulations.
Initially,in recent years most of the people lliving in the big cities.There is many reason for individuals.It's could be for education,work opportunity or better life rather than village.Thus,cities are become overcrowded.One of this overpeople problem is lack of security.In high population cities police officers,soldiers or even doctors can not be sufficient for everyone.Or if the city has a more than normal amount students,this mean the government should establish new schools or some students and their family should be move.And even in new schools could be more than student according to amount of enough and this circumstance caused decrease of education quality.
Overall,for the each big cities even new developing villages government should make regulations.If some one want to move to another city should inform the government before move.After this inform,according to him or her education situation or occupation and him or her dependents they be able to move or not by government permission.With this regulation there is should be limit.If the society wants to more clear,wellbeing and comfortable life, they should be follow the this rules.
Eventually, there is different ways to increase life standarts.One is regulations and the other one is encourage the people for living in the town.If the governments help to small village for developing and wellbeing life people could be stay their home city.With in this way, many of problems can prevent before happen and most of the people could be more happy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, thus, well, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53356890459 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.58674824196 2.80592935109 128% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540636042403 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 70.0 20.2975951904 345% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 137.745008984 49.4020404114 279% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 391.5 106.682146367 367% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 70.75 20.7667163134 341% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.25 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 39.0 5.01903807615 777% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259677201991 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160482083441 0.084324248473 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589692944732 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160482083441 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589692944732 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.0 13.0946893788 305% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -8.03 50.2224549098 -16% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.8 11.3001002004 281% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.98 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.18 8.58950901804 130% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 34.5 9.78957915832 352% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.0 10.1190380762 296% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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