You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Some teachers think that international student exchange would be beneficial for all teenage school students.
Do you think its advantages will outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words.
In contemporary era experience various of food,culture or even life style is can be boost personal life quality.Especially,learn the different and international lifes can be rare chance for students.In the early age achieve experience be able to assist their rest of the life.
Initially,some teachers are believed the education life is not comprehensive to just study and doing homework.According to this teacher,all kind of students should be take action for living and learning in different country as a international student.While be international student,they can be learn how to be strong by themselves or they can take a chance to develop their foreign language.And also,the students must encourage to part of this kind of programmes.
On the other hands,there could be negatives sides for young students.Be international student can be fancy and exciting but also this mean they have to adaptation to somewhere new.Some kind of students cannot be able to brave to take this action.Be alone for a while is not piece of cake for everyone.For the teenage person fall in depression can be very easy.And if the student does not has to strong character they must be avoid this type of programmes.
Eventually according to my opinion,most of the students should be part of this community if they have a this kind of chance.Specially relocate to somewhere new could be hard but also with new places meaning observe new lifes,nature and gain new friendship.They can understand to other peoples believes,life goals or culture.With this way students became more ingulgent and understanding individuals.Thus,this kind of events must be supports from international foundations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: While
...rent country as a international student.While be international student,they can be le...
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...hance to develop their foreign language.And also,the students must encourage to par...
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Suggestion: Some
...hey have to adaptation to somewhere new.Some kind of students cannot be able to brav...
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...ot be able to brave to take this action.Be alone for a while is not piece of cake ...
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...while is not piece of cake for everyone.For the teenage person fall in depression c...
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Suggestion: And
...son fall in depression can be very easy.And if the student does not has to strong c...
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Line 5, column 389, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'have'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
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Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...e very easy.And if the student does not has to strong character they must be avoid ...
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Line 7, column 35, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...s. Eventually according to my opinion,most of the students should be part of this ...
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Line 7, column 67, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'parted'?
Suggestion: parted
... opinion,most of the students should be part of this community if they have a this k...
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Line 7, column 103, Rule ID: DT_DT[2]
Message: Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only 'a' or 'this' is left.
Suggestion: a; this
... be part of this community if they have a this kind of chance.Specially relocate to so...
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Suggestion: Specially
...nity if they have a this kind of chance.Specially relocate to somewhere new could be hard...
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Suggestion: , nature
...ith new places meaning observe new lifes,nature and gain new friendship.They can unders...
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Suggestion: They
...ew lifes,nature and gain new friendship.They can understand to other peoples believe...
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...can understand to other peoples believes,life goals or culture.With this way students...
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Suggestion: Thus
...ingulgent and understanding individuals.Thus,this kind of events must be supports fr...
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Suggestion: , this
...lgent and understanding individuals.Thus,this kind of events must be supports from in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, while, as to, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41984732824 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.71983722426 2.80592935109 133% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545801526718 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 20.2975951904 320% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.3403343981 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 355.0 106.682146367 333% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.5 20.7667163134 315% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.25 7.06120827912 230% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195530478152 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133780790809 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584555340133 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133780790809 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584555340133 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.8 13.0946893788 281% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -2.96 50.2224549098 -6% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.8 11.3001002004 264% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.04 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.84 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.0 10.1190380762 277% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 47, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , culture
...temporary era experience various of food,culture or even life style is can be boost pers...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 113, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Especially
...e is can be boost personal life quality.Especially,learn the different and international l...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 123, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , learn
...e boost personal life quality.Especially,learn the different and international lifes c...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 200, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...l lifes can be rare chance for students.In the early age achieve experience be abl...
^^
Line 3, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , some
...ist their rest of the life. Initially,some teachers are believed the education lif...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 111, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: According
...ensive to just study and doing homework.According to this teacher,all kind of students sh...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , all
...doing homework.According to this teacher,all kind of students should be take action ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ng and learning in different country as a international student.While be internat...
^
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: While
...rent country as a international student.While be international student,they can be le...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...l student.While be international student,they can be learn how to be strong by themse...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 392, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
...hance to develop their foreign language.And also,the students must encourage to par...
^^^
Line 3, column 400, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
... develop their foreign language.And also,the students must encourage to part of this...
^^^^
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
...ind of programmes. On the other hands,there could be negatives sides for young stud...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Be
...d be negatives sides for young students.Be international student can be fancy and ...
^^
Line 5, column 181, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Some
...hey have to adaptation to somewhere new.Some kind of students cannot be able to brav...
^^^^
Line 5, column 247, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Be
...ot be able to brave to take this action.Be alone for a while is not piece of cake ...
^^
Line 5, column 302, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...while is not piece of cake for everyone.For the teenage person fall in depression c...
^^^
Line 5, column 361, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
...son fall in depression can be very easy.And if the student does not has to strong c...
^^^
Line 5, column 389, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'have'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: have
...e very easy.And if the student does not has to strong character they must be avoid ...
^^^
Line 5, column 389, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...e very easy.And if the student does not has to strong character they must be avoid ...
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Line 7, column 35, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , most
...s. Eventually according to my opinion,most of the students should be part of this ...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 67, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'parted'?
Suggestion: parted
... opinion,most of the students should be part of this community if they have a this k...
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Line 7, column 103, Rule ID: DT_DT[2]
Message: Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only 'a' or 'this' is left.
Suggestion: a; this
... be part of this community if they have a this kind of chance.Specially relocate to so...
^^^^^^
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Specially
...nity if they have a this kind of chance.Specially relocate to somewhere new could be hard...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , nature
...ith new places meaning observe new lifes,nature and gain new friendship.They can unders...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 257, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
...ew lifes,nature and gain new friendship.They can understand to other peoples believe...
^^^^
Line 7, column 302, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , life
...can understand to other peoples believes,life goals or culture.With this way students...
^^^^^
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: With
... peoples believes,life goals or culture.With this way students became more ingulgent...
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Suggestion: Thus
...ingulgent and understanding individuals.Thus,this kind of events must be supports fr...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , this
...lgent and understanding individuals.Thus,this kind of events must be supports from in...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, while, as to, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41984732824 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.71983722426 2.80592935109 133% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545801526718 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 20.2975951904 320% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.3403343981 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 355.0 106.682146367 333% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.5 20.7667163134 315% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.25 7.06120827912 230% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195530478152 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133780790809 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584555340133 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133780790809 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584555340133 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.8 13.0946893788 281% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -2.96 50.2224549098 -6% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.8 11.3001002004 264% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.04 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.84 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.0 10.1190380762 277% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.