You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In recent years, obesity is one of the serious problems around the world. In some countries, the weight of individual tend to go up while their health become decline. In this essay, i will discuss about some reasons and solutions for solving them
To begin with the first cause, nowadays people choose fast food for their breakfast or lunch even for their dinner because of the convenience. For example, citizens usually start their morning with a sandwich or hamburger and a cup of coffee and it saves many times for their preparations or travelling. However they do not regconize that it contains a great number of calories and fats which damage to their health day by day. So that, people should cook and prepare for their meal at home. Although it takes 1-2 hours per day, it can be an alternative keys compare to using fast food. In addition, selecting an organic and fresh food at the supermarket or store with the products have labled to show the precise nutritional information is the essential choice for people who want to cook at home.
Regard to the second one, people are shrinking to do exercise or go for outside activities at the moment. Perhaps, their workload is too much to spend time on exercise or basically, they are too lazy to do it. To solve this problems, humans should consider doing exercise as a form of entertainment. Such as me, a student in the university, I usually go jogging or ride my bike for relaxing in the evening and it helps me to recover my energy for the next day. Moreover, people ought to make a schedule for controling their time, spending more time on doing exercies, gyms or playing sports to improve the health and brain development
In conclusion, obesity and the increasing weight are in an emergency situation but it can easily to solve. I believe that in the future, citizens will realize and change their routines to have a healthy and beautiful body.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Line 3, column 55, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to fast'
Suggestion: to fast
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71940298507 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5722164793 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585074626866 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.2032547216 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.928571429 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9285714286 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163768849481 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608534258827 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393774311078 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103349681598 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359256470547 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.