You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
There is an argument that buying things online has more demerits than merits. It is said because of the quality or the authenticity of the product is not known from just the picture of it. Many doubt it's originality as well. But I completely disagree with their statement as the advantages outweigh it's disadvantages. This essay will focus on some main benefits of online shopping.
It is difficult to imagine a world without Internet. Many youngsters and even senior citizens are well educated with the use of it. We also have a huge number of websites where we can order anything with just a single tap. It's much easier than those traditional shopping days where one is a dead zombie by the end of the day. Online shopping makes your work trouble-free as you have more options to choose while you are at home, relaxing on your bed.
Booking tickets is much more comfortable from home or at your workstation rather than going to the airport or railways and wasting your precious time. This will also help you save your gas and there are no parking hassles. One can save energy by avoiding those long lines and large annoying crowds.
In conclusion, shopping from home is much more comfortable and easier in your pajamas than playing dress up and having a stressful day finding the stuff you need. This is convenient, and one can do other important work from the time he or she saved. With little knowledge, anyone can access such a facility as everyone uses a smartphone or a computer these days
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 190, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun doubt seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many doubts'.
Suggestion: Many doubts
... not known from just the picture of it. Many doubt its originality as well. But I complete...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, well, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1244.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71212121212 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52211294731 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609848484848 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.549721581 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.75 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1875 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147416720329 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455155645075 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392820442086 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0911318914797 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0135723969586 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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