Young children are make a decision base on peer pressure. This problem brought more benefits than drawbacks. Agree or disagree
Life is a banquet of choices and young children with no prespective are starving to death. To my way of thinking, i disagree with this viewpoint that the young give options based on peer pressure bringing more advantage than disadvantage.
It is undeniable that peer pressure instigate some several pros. Children usually get a higher score when they are censured from their parents. In addition, after going through self-improve and re-educate in prisons, criminals tend to be better than in the past.
On the other hand, peer pressure observed a dramatic problem in society. Because nowadays, growing numbers of people must under pressure from many respects. First and foremost, family require their kinds to do what they supposed to be right such as: choice of school, choice of bachelor, choice of work, choice of lover and choice of life. The young do not want to define their parent’s decision so they tend to obey and do in boredem, frustration. As a consequence, the children measured that they usually feel embarrassed, worry and do not know right or wrong and can not decide their own things. Then they can lose disorientation in their life.
Society is a significant feature which many children must withstand. So i want to mention a phrase that is used individuals and appearing in the social network. This is “body shaming” and it show the people who recieve bad sentences or suffer the flash for their physique. As a result, the young may disappointed, disappointment leads to being scared of people, scary leads to locking themself in the room, detention leads to creating a number of psychological diseases.
In conclusion, people have different reasons for the way they live their lives, so no one can put everyone’s reasons in the samebox. If someone else give you peer pressure, please learn how to say “no”, protecting yourself and your point. “Be you, bravely” is a quote which i really like so finally, i would keep my opinion that peer pressure bring more negative than positive impcact.
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- Young children are make a decision base on peer pressure. This problem brought more benefits than drawbacks. Agree or disagree 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, may, really, so, then, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0798816568 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92203015299 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591715976331 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9983814796 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3888888889 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167221638286 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509736154305 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598790924186 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101562614387 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769610608121 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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