Young people today are better qualified than they were in the past. Some people argue that this is because competition for jobs is greater than it used to be. Others say that people only continue their education because the opportunities exist for them to do so.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In recent times, it is common that the younger generation tends to have higher educational levels compared with the previous generations. Some people believe that this trend is due to the fact that they need to equip themselves to compete hard with peers for a job, while others argue that more opportunities to continue learning lead to the situation. However, I think youngsters’ higher educational qualification is caused by multiple factors including job competition, accessibility to education and personal financial ability. (82)
It is undeniable that there are higher expectations that young people encountering when they are hunting jobs. Normally, advertisements for jobs may list a range of skills such as computer skills, literacy and numeracy ability, professional knowledge and so on. Applicants need to hone their skills through education and studying before they enter their career path. Conversely, seniors like my grandparents did not have to be qualified with a university degree to find a decent job in the past. (81)
Besides, various possibilities and opportunities for people to further education are more available. Compared with the elderly, young people have greater accessibility to university education. In the meanwhile, online learning enables people to learn at any time at anywhere with its flexibility. Thus, it is a reasonable consequence that the current generation is better qualified. (55)
In my opinion, the tendency of pursuing better education is influenced by not only both of the factors mentioned above but also an increasing income level. Without sufficient financial support, young people have no chance to be educated even when they are required more by employers and provided chances to further their education. (51)
In conclusion, harsher competition, the omnipresence of educational training and personal finance offer young people more possibility to be more qualified than ever. The future generations will follow the trend and become highly educated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, conversely, however, if, may, so, thus, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1707.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57843137255 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10617261963 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601307189542 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6201968698 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.8 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333951231755 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979332235051 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676293619713 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173609080212 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020885668935 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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