Young people today are better qualified than they were in the past. Some people argue that this is because competition for job is greater that it used to be. Others say that people only continue their education because the opportunities exist for them to do so.
Nowadays, young generation have better qualifications compared to their counterparts in the past. The majority of people argue that the reason behind this is that they are aware that there is a competition they face in the job market, while others claim that the young are supplied with more opportunities to have proper knowledge with better education system.
The main reason why todays youth have better educational qualities than the ones in the past is that they are required to prove why they are the best candidate in order to get well paid job. For this reason they are competing with their contempraries. In my country, young people are improving their CVs with a variety of certificates and by attending professional seminars and volunteering projects.Promotion and the desire to get a high salary would be another example. By this I mean young workerks compete within the company through advancing their qualifications so as to be promoted to a higher position with an appropriate payment.
Admitedly, there is an argument that suggests various chances make it possible to acquire more knowledge and skills for young people. Here I am refering to the fact that better conditions with proper educational approaches are created for youth. For example, in most Muslim countries women almost had no right to study and men mainly learnt religious subjects. On the contrary, young boys and girls today have equal rights and opportunities to be knowledgeable. Furthermore, with the rise of the internet, the schemes like distnace learning have emerged, allowing people to study wherever they are. This, in turn, influence on the level of qualifications of the young.
To conclude, both competition amd available opportunities have a position impact on how well qualified today's young generation is. However, in my opinion, competition plays a big part in this respect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 401, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Promotion
...onal seminars and volunteering projects.Promotion and the desire to get a high salary wou...
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Line 3, column 569, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... through advancing their qualifications so as to be promoted to a higher position with a...
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Line 5, column 542, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to have'
Suggestion: to have
...net, the schemes like distnace learning have emerged, allowing people to study where...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, as to, for example, i mean, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22185430464 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02137031274 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566225165563 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7836926864 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.642857143 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323151256741 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105343158666 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506158964546 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198429286068 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535964514358 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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