Young people who commit crimes should be treated the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is some dispute whether young criminals should receive equal sentences as their mature counterparts. In my opinion, levying same sentence as the mature on young criminals is unnecessary and have negative impacts on society as whole.
Most crimes committed by young people comes from their unawareness of the consequences of their behaviors. Because of this, the majority of juvenile delinquency is accidental not intentional. Furthermore, the driving force behind criminal acts from young criminals are often rooted in their unbearable peer pressure or study burden. Thus, severe punishment on these immature individuals seem unnecessary and could cause hatred and distrust among them.
Another justification upholding less serious sentences for the young is that youngsters are set to play a large part in labour market. It becomes increasingly competitive for countries nowadays to attract foreign investment. Among other factors, young labor workforce plays a significant role in contribution to development of nations. Therefore, punishing young individuals with equal sentence to the mature would have negative impacts on future workforce of nations, thereby damaging countries’ competitive advantages.
Despite these impacts, some may argue that loose law enforcement on young mind may cause their inadequate understanding of harsh realities of the world. This implies that they may neglect the power of law in years to come. However, this thinking is flawed, as most juveniles have certain knowledge of law thanks to popularity of lawful education on social media platforms.
In sum, young generation are main drive of growth of the world. Therefore, to judge them, the authorities should take in other elements such as their mechanism or the impact it would have on community.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... serious sentences for the young is that youngsters are set to play a large part ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60661764706 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94831624211 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621323529412 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4728946799 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.666666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1333333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103827538632 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0355166764321 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389666962334 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0585033107332 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280155751194 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.96 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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