1. Some people believe that a greater difference in age between parents and children is more beneficial than less of a difference.
Do you think the advantages of a greater age difference outweigh the disadvantages?
With the increment in modernization of the socitey and high professional aspirations of both husband and wife, has a direct influence on the late start of the family. This cause the huge age gap between the parents and the children. This essay emphasis on the disadvantages of the greater age difference by exploring below mentioned viewpoints:
Parent who have greater age difference have much more to offer to their kids in terms of facility, advice or comfort than parents with less age difference. However, without a doubt, there is an inevitable decline in the efficiency, energy and life span with increasing age. This has a direct effect on the quality and time aged parent have with their kids. As an Instance, growing old calls a lot of age-related health issues like arthritis, cataract etc, some of which are chronic. These chronic health issues might not allow the parents to spend as much time in outdoor activities as they would at a younger age. Thus, big age gap has consequential effect on meeting the kid’s extracurricular requirements, which is vital for kids while growing up.
Age gap may hinder the amount of time parents will spend with the kids. For example, children need the care, advice and emotional support till they don’t stand up on their own feet (which mostly is after age of 21 or sometimes 25). Parents with greater age difference with their kids might not be able to look after their kids or be available by their adolescence. And thus, age gap directly influences the amount of time parents would spends with their kids.
In conclusion, the higher age difference between parents and their children has a negative impact on the time and care a child would need from them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 441, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'spend'
Suggestion: spend
...uences the amount of time parents would spends with their kids. In conclusion, the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92808219178 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67650296779 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52397260274 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4375590907 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.692307692 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301030150844 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116843160341 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0994942927686 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206152394518 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340687712598 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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