Some people believe that a greater difference in age between parents and children is more beneficial than less of a difference.
Do you think the advantages of a greater age difference outweigh the disadvantages?
Though age is becoming a number these days, it is observable in society the crucial part it plays. The more the difference between children and parents have many benefits but also some complexity. I will discuss the major advantages and disadvantages, and evaluate my opinion and thinking in the end.
In counting the benefits, foremost will be the maturity in the parents at an older age enabling the children to receive best nurture. The Scientific American has published in its article about genetic evolutionary factors that seniority enhances the better evolution and inheritance making the off-spring more stealthier. The emotional balance is superior with more difference in age between parents and off-springs. In 1992, the famous Melbourne daughter of scientists created sensation in her speech for national ideology observed as the reason towards her parenting.
In looking at the disadvantages, the higher the age difference the ability of the parents to sustain their care to children becomes questionable. The risk of parents active health is high if they are older than 40 while their children being under 15. The article published on a survey conducted in California, on 1000 families, with higher age disparity stunned the nation with its results, quoting many children faced lack of parental protection as their parents faced retirement or health issues. However, this case exist in a state where there is varied life style circumstances.
To conclude, if evaluated, based on the larger beneficial cases when overlooked through a wide angle of modern day life composition, I admit that on average parents over 35 having children will outweigh the disadvantages that stems due to senile reasons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 306, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'stealthier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: stealthier
...n and inheritance making the off-spring more stealthier. The emotional balance is superior with...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37269372694 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.897752874 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627306273063 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6354693535 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.333333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280938920335 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993753981183 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823855820737 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159158484975 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470578520025 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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