advertising
All people think something about advertisements. Usually they capable to buy the advertised goods because it will be good for them, but the rest think about that topic on another way, their viewpoint is that the advertising companies want to sell everything what they can. In my opinion these companies are use manipulation to make us purchase many things against our real needs.
I mean, they pay for marketing, research, designing and they do this to earn as much as they can. I can see this well on food, games, cleening items, etc.. If anyone read the ingredients on the food's label, probably can find a few bad things between them. Usually sugar is one of those and maybe the worst one and there are many others which can cause health problems. The games have special ___ to say to us, buy me. The cleaning products say: I am a few percent better and your life will be easier with me, I can clean everything. The advertisements talk only about the good features. Maybe these things are real, but there are several bad point and the companies behind advertising don't want you to know about these. That is a kind of manipulation and there are much more tool in their hand like this. Everyone have saw these in television, radio, on youtube or on the streets, on boards.
In conclusion I think, every individuals have to open their eyes and see facts. We are manipulated and forced to buy things through advertising and because of this, we buy way too much thing, use them for a short period of time and then we replace them something else. We should develop our abilities to catch these manipulative things and stop ourselves before we buy those advertised products.
Since the invention of social media, many people have been better able to connect with each other and also to keep up to date with the lives of their friends, families, co-workers and even celebrities, to such a degree which was previously impossible.
However, social media has its risks. As people of all ages have access to social media, children can be exposed to adult content, and are themselves vulnerable to be approached by strangers with unknown intentions. Even if children are sure of who they're talking to on social media, social media's issues are not completely eliminated. Cyber bullying is frequently reported in the news, and occurs on social media between children and schoolchildren. This is problematic, as it means even when children are at home, remote from their bullies they can still be bullied when they're inside their own homes.
Social media can be problematic for adults, too. People often feel comfortable posting things on social media that they wouldn't say in real life. This can indirectly cause a bad impression on other people, and if employers judge the nature of the content prospective employees post on social media to be inappropriate, it can affect their chances of attaining or keeping jobs.
As long as people are aware of the risks of using social media, and are careful to post only respectful and respectable content, then the advantages of social media far outweigh the disadvantages, and children and adults alike should be allowed to benefit from such technology.
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- advertising 11
- Studies show that many criminals do not receive enough education. For this reason, people believe that the best ways to reduce crime is to educate them so they can find a job after being released. Do you agree or disagree? 61
- Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks.Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...well on food, games, cleening items, etc.. If anyone read the ingredients on the f...
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Line 3, column 534, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...easier with me, I can clean everything. The advertisements talk only about the good...
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Line 3, column 686, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...nt and the companies behind advertising dont want you to know about these. That is a...
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Line 3, column 776, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'tools'?
Suggestion: tools
...of manipulation and there are much more tool in their hand like this. Everyone have ...
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Line 3, column 820, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'sawed', 'sawn', 'seen'.
Suggestion: sawed; sawn; seen
... in their hand like this. Everyone have saw these in television, radio, on youtube ...
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Line 5, column 214, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ay too much thing, use them for a short period of time and then we replace them something else...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, then, well, i mean, i think, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68474576271 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54459854171 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596610169492 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8701664175 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.375 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4375 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0455943315957 0.244688304435 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0199332162369 0.084324248473 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316293091457 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0328052382495 0.151304729494 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232834897325 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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