All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults.
What are the reasons for this rise in obesity? How could it be tackled?
Modern lifestyle offers many benefits for both children and adults. However, it also leads to the growth of obese people in society. In this essay, I will discuss reasons for this problem and suggest possible solutions.
Let us start with factors why numerous people suffer from obesity. The first reason is that people usually eat fast food. Plenty of children have gained excessive weight, because in large quantities they consume junk food, which goes beyond the normal amount of calories. Secondly, people mainly lead a sedentary lifestyle. Many parents, for instance, become extremely fat, since they work in offices, where they largely sit in one place, as well as refuse to do exercise. Therefore, after analyzing, it is clear that there is a multitude of factors contributing to the disorder with large weight.
Nevertheless, some dietitians claim obese people should take the following actions, if they want to stay in shape. Firstly, they should do more exercise. Nutritionists recommend people with all stages of obesity, for example, to go to the gym, because they will naturally be able to burn unnecessary fat in the body. Secondly, they also advice people to eat homemade food. Obese humans should quit their detrimental habit of eating junk food and begin to cook at home, involving much of fresh fruit and vegetables, so that they will consume a recommended quantities of calories. As a result, after considering, it is obvious that people can deal with obesity.
In conclusion, even though there are many factors leading to obesity in children as well as adults, I think that it is viable to address this problem, if people with this illness adopt the above mentioned measures.
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'quantity'?
Suggestion: quantity
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13261648746 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59563052553 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 11.0 2.10420841683 523% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.4830463883 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4375 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204342579431 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674410284288 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794735750969 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164091400796 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0968480321147 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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