All towns and cities need to have large outdoor public spaces such as parks or squares. Do you agree or disagree?
Urban planning has a considerable bearing on the well-being of the whole city. Despite there have been arguments about which is the most effective way to design a city in order to boost the dweller’s welfare, I am firmly convinced that the presence of public facilities such as parks and squares are necessary.
These green places play an indispensable role in the development of physical health. Since both adults and children in major cities staring at the computer for hours straight, either for working or playing. As a result, they tend to have visual problems or spine disorders. In addition, the lack of leisure activities could be attributed to the increasing health diseases such as obesity and diabetes. These low levels of physical activities could be attributed to the lack of open spaces where people can exercise and play sport. It is sensible why parks and squares are of paramount importance.
Health aside, wide public infrastructures also improve the psychological well-being of cities citizens. Communal sites such as parks or sports venues are deemed the site where people gather to relax after grueling working hours and build local communities. For example, one can be a part of any nearby communities, such as a basketball club, yoga club, which foster a sense of belonging. Moreover, staying indoor for an extended period of time can take a heavy toll on one’s mental health. Mental illness such as depression or social anxiety is commonly seen when a person fails to seek social interaction, which can be found in public venues.
In conclusion, there are valid reasons to support the construction of public spaces in cities. With the increasing population, it is undoubtedly that these places are directly connected to the well-being of citizens.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14137931034 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84619820692 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593103448276 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0157693251 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158435775878 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509010405438 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488451249695 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0984066760677 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337610301828 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.