Being a celebrity such as a famous film star or sports personality brings problems as well as benefits.
Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
Today, the entertainment world has become extremely impactful over the people, that almost every second individual aspires to be a celebrity in some way or the other. However, every glittering star has its grey side. In this essay, I will highlight both the aspects being a celebrity.
On one hand, being the most sought after personality fetches enormous amount of attention and recognition. People often go crazy to get the glimpse of their favourite star. In addition, celebrities, because of their worldwide fame get preference over others wherever they go. For instance, special arrangements are made at the airports for highly known faces, in order to protect them from any inconvenience such are the benefits these special few enjoys.
On the other hand, every seeming advantage brings with it, problems of its own kind. Not only does the known personalities enjoy benefits of being on the stature, they also face hindrances and have to pay for being famous. Often it has been seen, celebrities complaining, media to be too intrusive and interfering, which sometimes create unwanted problems in their lives. Another disadvantage could be that celebs are expected to be perfect in their shape as well as in conduct twenty-four seven, which causes stress on them and many a times, their frustrating attitudes and moods are being caught on the camera due to this stress.
Laconically, it is brought to the conclusion that being a popular person is a matter of utmost responsibility. Indeed it has its benefits, but at the same time it can be too taxing to handle.
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a time' or simply 'times'?
Suggestion: a time; times
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Line 13, column 112, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Indeed,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, second, so, well, for instance, in addition, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1323.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08846153846 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82496007198 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653846153846 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.730862133 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.769230769 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270187110952 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820892439679 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462337502488 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144209385148 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704872981443 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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