Being a celebrity, such as famous film star or sports personality, brings problems as well as benefits.
In today’s world, being a celebrity is viewed as bringing benefits. While people may see it as a welcome to problems, I would see it as an advantage that overshadows the drawbacks.
There are innumerable reasons why people may disapprove of being famous, the first objection is lost of freedom and privacy. Being followed by paparazis and kept asking about personal questions is a mean of intervening into other people’s life. It may deter those people from having a relaxed, balance moment when needing for a timebreak. Take justin bieber as an example, he got popular from a very young age and being surrounded by the bodyguards all the time to protect himself from overexcited fans. Should he not be secured all the time, he will not live a normal life like everybody such as going out shopping, watching movies in theater,…
In spite of the downsides mentioned above, I would contend that being a celebrity is a positive benefit. First and foremost, the blessing is having a large sum of money to meet all of the needs. People do not have to worry about how does the problem concern as long as if there was expenditure on the issue, it may lessen the burden on the sufferers. For an example settling down on another country, the celebrities, famous film stars can have the probality of purchasing household things to live there. Another merit is they have a greater chance of attaining newer oppotunities to upgrade their status in social such as becoming an ambassador for a brand, advertising for a campaign,.. By spreading the popularity through social medias also among famous people to create an awareness for the well-off communities to get the chance of working with them
In conclusion, while there are some disadvantages of being a celebrity, the merits do outweigh the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90522875817 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83015781219 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601307189542 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.2120063568 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.083333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214501257049 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677468677597 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603292915044 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105114634005 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393453231778 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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