In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care.
Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In developed countries, especially in UK, people move to old-age home because of the neglect and isolation from their children. At this place, not only they spend their rest of life but also nurses will look after them. But, there is always a question who should pay for all the expense for such places, whether the family or government? In my opinion, although little grant can be expected from families, authorities financial involvement is essential.
To begin with, the government has enough resources to afford the expenses on this places. As the inflation rate is sky high, although old people have some finances, it is not sufficient to cope up with increasing price of medicines and other basic needs. For instance, according to IMF, the price of medicines has increased by 50% and cost of living by 60% in last three years, which is much higher compared to their savings. Moreover, the government has more finances, which is collected from tax payers’ money, to support calm, composed serene life of senior citizens.
However, families do have moral responsibility to take care of their old parents. Unfortunately, it is extremely difficult to meet the end needs of their, while majority of them are suffering from chronic diseases. In Britain, for example, 65% of old people are suffering from serious illness that can cost fortune in hospitals for its treatment. Consequently, they rely on public retirement home facilities but this does not mean they are incapable to offer little money. Thus, instead of complete reliance on the authorities and putting burden on nation’s budget, families should offer as much as they can.
In Conclusion, although the government can utilize their vast capital to fulfil the needs of senior citizens, people should supply support according to their capabilities. It is a joint responsibility and duty of both to take care of old people in the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 78, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, look, moreover, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13099041534 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81181380782 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600638977636 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.8189752305 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.066666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325793271603 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987290146713 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624165972998 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185152914534 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506058804337 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.