Children are committing more crimes. What are the causes? How to punish them?

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Children are committing more crimes. What are the causes? How to punish them?


In recent years, the rate of crime is on rise particularly young generation who influence easily. ‎There are various of measures leading to this trend when searching regards to causes. Although ‎social system has provided protective laws to punish people committing crimes, in case of ‎children should have different approaches.‎

Committing crimes by children is one of the major issues, which has been brought by rapid ‎lifestyle development and urbanism. It is obvious that this rate is increasing significantly in high ‎populated areas due to high demanding method of life, such as wearing branded clothes and ‎updated gadgets. Children compare their facilities with others and if their families fail to provide ‎their expectations, they might influence by gangs which promise them for their wishes. In ‎additionally, media has major impact on children through violation in television programs and ‎computer games. These media are advertising indirectly vandalism and other minor crimes which ‎can be start point for use. Finally, the most important reason leading children to violate public ‎rules is abounding. This lack of education and skills might result social rejection and consequently ‎committing crime.‎

Social system has provided punishments and sanction for monitoring and enforcing laws and ‎discipline people to obey laws. In fact, when it comes to children crimes the judgment system ‎should offer special punishment which are suitable for the age and the type of crime. However, ‎some of children do not caution of their actions and its consequence. Enhance, there should be ‎different criminal laws court and trained judges to approach children who committed crime. ‎Punishment should not be equal to adults committing similar crimes. Doing free community ‎works and attending psychological and social training might support them mentally to avoid ‎violation in the future. ‎

In conclusion, although violation and breaking public rules are increasing by children, finding the ‎causes and planning to tackle the trend, might be done by authorities.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, however, if, so, in conclusion, in fact, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75471698113 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98768618489 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619496855346 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.1509145979 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73333333333 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216445508212 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659251635086 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660940945729 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13048274995 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395810024728 0.056905535591 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.07 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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