Children are committing more crimes. What are the causes? How to punish them?
In recent years, the rate of crime is on rise particularly young generation who influence easily. There are various of measures leading to this trend when searching regards to causes. Although social system has provided protective laws to punish people committing crimes, in case of children should have different approaches.
Committing crimes by children is one of the major issues, which has been brought by rapid lifestyle development and urbanism. It is obvious that this rate is increasing significantly in high populated areas due to high demanding method of life, such as wearing branded clothes and updated gadgets. Children compare their facilities with others and if their families fail to provide their expectations, they might influence by gangs which promise them for their wishes. In additionally, media has major impact on children through violation in television programs and computer games. These media are advertising indirectly vandalism and other minor crimes which can be start point for use. Finally, the most important reason leading children to violate public rules is abounding. This lack of education and skills might result social rejection and consequently committing crime.
Social system has provided punishments and sanction for monitoring and enforcing laws and discipline people to obey laws. In fact, when it comes to children crimes the judgment system should offer special punishment which are suitable for the age and the type of crime. However, some of children do not caution of their actions and its consequence. Enhance, there should be different criminal laws court and trained judges to approach children who committed crime. Punishment should not be equal to adults committing similar crimes. Doing free community works and attending psychological and social training might support them mentally to avoid violation in the future.
In conclusion, although violation and breaking public rules are increasing by children, finding the causes and planning to tackle the trend, might be done by authorities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, however, if, so, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75471698113 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98768618489 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619496855346 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.1509145979 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73333333333 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216445508212 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659251635086 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660940945729 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13048274995 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395810024728 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.07 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.