Children are now less active in their free time than in the past. Therefore, sports lessons must be compulsory in schools. To what extend do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There is an evidence that these days, children spend their leisure time in a passive way rather than in the past. For this reason, sports lessons must be included into the schedule of schools. I agree with this statement and in this essay I am going to give reasons and examples to support my point of view.
With the development of technology and science, most children spend their free time by watching TV or playing computer games. As a result, it has a bad effect on their health, following serious illnesses, such as heart disease or obesity as children get older. If physical exercises are obligatory at schools for all children, the government do not have to spend a lot of money on medical care in the future. Despite of this government should improve and create more sports facilities and areas for young generation to prevent this issue in the following years.
However, some people assume that sports lessons are a waste of time and that kids must only focus on their academic studies. I am sure that this viewpoint is wrong because it has a number of benefits. For example, by attending physical exercise programs children who are obese or children with reduced physical activity can improve their mental well-being. Additionally, sports lessons help children to learn discipline and working with others as a team, which ameliorates social skills and ability to work in a team.
To sum up, it is necessary to involve physical education into the plan of every school in order to have vigorous and healthy young generation in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 73, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a passive way" with adverb for "passive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...days, children spend their leisure time in a passive way rather than in the past. For this reaso...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, as for, for example, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88301886792 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56195568766 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.7852628804 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.833333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229121167425 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819658107808 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555806366961 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128298292072 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757521328176 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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