In today’s world, with the advancement of computer software, translating one language to another has become a piece of cake. Many people are of the opinion as computer can do the necessary translation of languages so learning languages is not justified. However, I am of the opinion that learning an international language is definitely beneficial and it has numerous advantages.
With the introduction of computers in our life, its uses have been significant. In recent times numerous software has been introduced that makes our life easier. For example there have been numerous software that can decipher indigenous languages into any foreign language. These softwares are also equipped with features that can auto correct grammatical mistakes, thus easing the time and effort for a person to learn various languages.
However, computer are only helpful for writing emails from one language to another, they do not incorporate feeling into the content that is written. Also, when the computer converts words from one language to another, there are instances where the meaning of the words differs. This creates some serious confusion to the reader. This is the main reason why the uses of computers are limited in professional life too. People going abroad to study and travel cannot be totally dependent on computer for translation. This certainly creates a wrong impression about a person. Therefore, one definitely needs to know a foreign language when he in interacting with either a colleague or business partner of another country. Face to face interaction tends to creates more impact and build stronger relationship as compared to emails. So for one to have a successful interaction it is best to know the language rather than waiting for the computer to translate your thought.
In conclusion, though computer system has advanced it cannot replace a human interaction. Therefore learning a foreign language in today’s world is definitely beneficial, as it help to build ties and create stronger bonds. People all over the world, tend to bind with people of the same language. So according to me, learning an international language is advantageous.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 754, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'create'.
Suggestion: create
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Line 5, column 969, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the computer to translate your thought. In conclusion, though computer system ha...
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Line 7, column 91, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1836.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33720930233 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95004720792 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537790697674 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0875365212 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222352709808 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681826770002 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573626287126 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147352203607 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537746252008 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.