Art is considered an essential part of the culture throughout the world. Artist’s requires freedom to express their thoughts and imagination. Some individuals believe that given a full imaginative freedom brings great benefits on their work of arts. In my opinion, artists should have enough liberty in creativity instead of total freedom to release their emotions.
On one hand, an artist if given liberty would definitely come up with imaginative and creative idea. Through his imagination he not only creates awareness of all the social evil going around in the society but also helps to educate the masses too. For example, in the recent rape case of a minor, the accused was set free. It was because of various singers and actors that go together and came up with various songs and short film. This in turn put pressure on the government and brought the accused to justice. Similarly, artist through various painting on the wall not only add beautification to the place but also provides message for the community at large. For example, artist through various songs and painting portrayed the awareness for saving the girl child. This has brought awareness and thus created a change in people mentality.
On the other hand, giving too much liberty to the artist would definitely lead to its misuse. There are many instances many film have various vulgar content which is not appropriate for children. The sensor board does take necessary action to make the content appropriate for viewing. Similarly, if an artist is given full liberty, he would create drawing or painting that would hurt the sentiments of a community. For example, in recent instance the famous artist M.F. Hussain had drawn a picture of a goddess in an inappropriate dress. This stirred a communal violence, as it hurt the sentiment of a particular religion. Therefore, to avoid communal violence artist need to have limited freedom.
To conclude, for the artist to be productive, certain freedom needs to be given to the artist. However, too much liberty if given will result in misuse of the talent. Therefore, in my opinion freedom needs to be given, provided that their works are closely monitored for the betterment of the society.
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- Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? 67
- Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports. While others think that people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. do you agree or disagree? 78
- For centuries, important parts of education have remained such as reading, writing and maths. With the advent of computers, some people think that computer skill be made as a fourth skill to be added to the list. To what extent do you agree? (IELTS Academ 78
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[5]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'full imaginative freedom'.
Suggestion: full imaginative freedom
...on. Some individuals believe that given a full imaginative freedom brings great benefits on their work of ...
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Line 5, column 120, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun film seems to be countable; consider using: 'many films'.
Suggestion: many films
...to its misuse. There are many instances many film have various vulgar content which is no...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, similarly, so, therefore, thus, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1860.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06811989101 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66098581419 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547683923706 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.0447671323 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.5454545455 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6818181818 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.59090909091 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229542054996 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729238981027 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0924345890632 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165275243369 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0934862088611 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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