Plastic bag forms a major cause for the pollution. Some people are of the opinion that plastic product like plastic bags needs to be prohibited as it pollutes the environment. This essay will discuss how plastic is dangerous and why it should be restricted.
In recent time, the use of plastic has increased enormously. Because it is cheap and has unique properties people tend to purchase plastic product on a large scale. Manufacturers also find it profitable to make products out of plastic rather than other materials. Plastic can be easily molded into various shapes making it ideal for products like furniture, bottles and utensils. Earlier glass bottles were used for containing consumable liquids like milk, aerated drinks and medicinal syrup. However glass being fragile, would easily break during transport and handling. Plastic on the other hand being durable and cheap soon replaced glass bottle and made transporting and handling easier. Therefore plastic soon was an alternative for glass as glass being fragile would easily break and was also expensive. Similarly plastic being ductile and malleable, plastic bags and ropes are being used instead of cloth bag and ropes.
Plastic has several advantages and if not disposed of properly would pollute the environment. Since ages scientist are working on ways to recycle plastic in an effective manner. Plastic tend to harm the environment due to its non-degradable nature. Disposing plastic in the ocean not only affect the marine life but also impacts the water making it hostile for marine life. Sea creatures accidentally swallow plastic debris which results in death due to choking. Similarly many people have the tendency to feed animal in plastic bag. These animals unknowingly along with the food chew the plastic bag thus making them sick. Eventually they die due to indigestion. Liquid stored in plastic bottles for days can be dangerous to consume due to the slow reaction with plastic. To curb the environment issue due to plastic people needs to aware of the damage the plastic is doing on the environment and how one needs to take precaution in disposing this material.
To conclude though plastic has enormous advantage, if not disposed of in a proper way would result in damaging the environment. However I think that putting a ban on plastic is not a solution. Educating people and minimizing the use will be the best option.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Suggestion: Similarly,
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Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...properly would pollute the environment. Since ages scientist are working on ways to r...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...mizing the use will be the best option.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, similarly, so, therefore, thus, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2019.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13740458015 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64193707914 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5368956743 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 630.0 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6684463252 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.76 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.72 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21477866316 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682626807568 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442224631386 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145412007506 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614639655905 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.