As countries become more industrialized, more people move from the countryside to urban areas. What are some problems caused by this and how can we solve them?
In this era of industrialization, many countries have witnessed increasingly large-scale immigration from rural areas to urban cities. This tendency resulted in poor living standards for citizens and unemployment. Therefore, the government needs to address these problems. This essay will discuss the hardships of people living in the cities and offer some solutions to implement.
The main difficulty is unemployed people, simply because there are fewer jobs than applicants in big cities. Rural residents tend to move to well-developed areas to look for high-paying jobs and improve their lifestyles. However, this trend is associated with the fast-growing industry, making the job-hunting environment more harshly competitive. Furthermore, the more advanced technologies are adopted widely, the less human involvement. Apart from the lack of employment capacity, incapable employees can get fired. To tackle this problem, the government should invest more money in the neighborhood, especially in the agriculture and service industries. Boosting economic evolvement in rural areas can create more job opportunities for local people, which helps decline the rate of emigrants.
Another issue facing people living in the cities is poor living conditions. The high property prices cause a lack of accommodation for citizens. People with an average salary cannot afford to buy their own house, and unemployed people can fall into homelessness. In addition, overpopulation in big cities associated with gas from companies leads to severe air pollution, which makes more and more people suffer from respiratory diseases. The way forward must be to provide accommodation and health facilities at reasonable costs. Besides, planting more trees would clean the air and help people breathe.
To sum up, although it’s undeniable that cities face several problems of unemployment and low living conditions, local councils possibly start to handle these challenges. I believe that these suggested measures would improve the quality of life effectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, however, if, look, so, therefore, well, apart from, as to, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.79470198675 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11630747973 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639072847682 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9071555505 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1052631579 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8947368421 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42105263158 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268396154606 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677486864902 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517444496083 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136189927277 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684224926039 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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