Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people.
Identify the possible causes of this trend, and propose some solutions you think would be effective.
One of the pressing issues emerging all over the world is the youth indulging themselves in the act of crime. It seems that there are various factors related to it, and there are different methods to deal with it.
Perhaps the major factor here is the greediness of money. Teenagers often get attracted to the path of earning plentiful of money within a short span. Such paths usually involve stealing, murdering someone, cyber-crimes and the list goes on. Apart from it, entertainment plays a vital role in youngster’s life. In a recent survey, it was observed that Crime genre was most watched by more than 70% of teenagers. Moreover, teenagers imagine themselves in such fictious characters. It is sensible to say that they are not mature enough to distinguish between real and reel life.
Turning to possible solutions, government must attract youngsters with exciting job offers. If government is successful in drawing their attention, they might not follow the crime path. Substantially, they will understand earning plentiful of money requires hard work. Other way to deal with it is, the crime-based shows must not be easily accessible to the youth. Both parents and the government need to take necessary measures. If parents keep an eye on their kid’s online activities, it will help them to stop them. Furthermore, government must have strict rules about release of criminal contents.
To conclude, factors such as money and influence of violent acts attract youths towards committing crime. With precautionary measures and awareness, we might be able to reduce crime among young people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20849420849 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78799236328 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660231660232 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 14.3226704524 49.4020404114 29% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.9444444444 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3888888889 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.099227774079 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0271396926067 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415575933291 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.065012673139 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391022428608 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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