Culture is similar all around the world. What is the reason? Is it a positive trend or negative?
In different parts of the world, culture is nearly becoming identical. Easy access to other cultures and lack of association to traditions are two major reasons of this growing trend. I think it should be discouraged as diversity of cultures is the main beauty of this world.
Nowadays, people have easy access to internet and social networking websites. This leads to accessibility of norms and values of other cultures, for instance, people in south Asia see pictures of celebrities of Hollywood and other people over there, so they get inspired by their dressing, way of talk and festivities. As a result of this exposure, they pick up their lifestyle and other aspects of living, too. Moreover, people do not possess strong association towards their culture. They tend to adopt fancy things more likely which consequently leads towards living in trendy ways of instead of following native patterns. So for these reasons, culture is becoming almost identical in all parts of the world.
I, however, believe that variation in the cultures should not be vanished because this is the only fascination which enhances tourism, exploration and societies around the world. Differences encourage people to visit other parts of the world. If culture were the same, no one would travel to explore. This could reduce tourism, travelling and immigration also. In addition to this, variety of languages, buildings, lifestyles should not be the same since every part of the world has different geography, weather and mindset. If people follow other cultures blindly, they will encounter severe consequences, such as actresses of South Asian countries often face backlash when they wear western dresses publicly.
To conclude, while modern technology and weaker bonding to traditions resulted into uniform culture in the world, variety still holds the beauty of the world. Instead of choosing other cultural values, people should show loyalty to theirs’ which manifest their norms and values.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 356, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, still, while, for instance, i think, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3821656051 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68505335926 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59872611465 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8753496674 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4117647059 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4705882353 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172067591318 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622774053474 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600179781015 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122860514593 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621182282828 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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