The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit.
What are the causes of this? how can be reduce smoking in society?
Smoking leads to poor health outcomes and it has a statutory warning printed on all cigarette packs but yet people smoke. Most individual associate smoking to lung cancer but in all probability they do not understand that smoking has an impact on all aspects of health. This essay will discuss several reasons that lead to this issue and various measures that how this problem can be solved.
To begin with, considering the root causes which may be focuses pupils to inhaling the dangerous gas. First and foremost, sometimes one of the kinfolk used this drug in the presence of their children and the adolescents try to copy them which leads to do smoking as their habit. Moreover, poor academic performance, guardian pressure for study and their worst relationships followed to utilize tobaccos to get relief from them which give hazardous result in future. In addition to it, studies shows that young people who see smoking in movies are more likely to start smoking. To elaborate this, teenagers seek actors as their idol and follow their bad habit, think it looks cool in public places. A newer influence on tobaccos use is the e-cigarette and other high-tech, fashionable electronic "vaping devices" and these equipment's are a way for new users to learn how to inhale and become to addicted to nicotine, which can be prepare them for smoking.
On the other hand, by conducting few strict steps can reduce the smoking. Stopping or cutting back on tobaccos causes physical and mental issues so it is a responsibility of parents to keep an eagle eye on their children's activities and their friendly behave work as a stress buster for them. Furthermore,
government should ban on the tobaccos industry's advertisements on both an internet and paper media and societies should arrange a health campaign to aware folks about the dangerous outcomes to utilize Tobaccos which may lead to death.
To conclude it, guardians should avoid to take drugs in the presence of children to give a good impact on them. Social media also keep away to take a commercial on drugs and government should educate people to get stay away from these bad habits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, look, may, moreover, so, in addition, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1800.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98614958449 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66077404925 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576177285319 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.1919541775 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.571428571 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7857142857 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251206551479 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827253636205 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677408807033 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114593761912 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104267614254 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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