Nowadays, due to cutting down trees in a wide area, developing city accommodation, and poaching, many animal species are in hazardous and even may extermination. Since the preservation of human life depends on the preservation of the cycle of ecosystems, and also the health of an ecosystem is maintained by its plants and animals, so protecting animals and nature is extremely important. Although there are so many endangered species across the globe, there are also incredible efforts underway, like raising public awareness by organizing workshops by NGOs, to save many of them.
Whenever species become in danger of extinction, it is a signal of an ecosystem’s imbalance, and this is so important for humans’ life. Obviously, a balanced ecosystem purifies the environment, giving us fresh air to breathe, a well water system to support diverse ocean life, and (cultivated land) arable land for agricultural production. Recent research shows that each year 6% of rainforest vanishing for human purposes all around the world, which accelerates the ecosphere imbalance. As can be seen, by disrupting the natural cycle of the ecosystem, human life will at a high level of risk degree, and need more attention from environmental activists.
Although non-profit organizations and NGOs are significantly working hard to protect the environment, this is not enough, and governments have to enforce stricter rules alongside broader training in this area. Since most of the destruction of forests and illegal hunting is done by powerful and influential companies, pressure from non-governmental organizations is disappointing, and their destructive activities must be prevented by the hindrance rules. For instance, in the current decade, the South African government has managed to reduce deforestation by up to 50 percent by enacting new laws. In short, with the help of governments, nonprofits, and non-governmental organizations, achieving the desired point in maintaining and reviving the ecosystem cycle is not unexpected.
These days, the acceleration rate of nature-imbalance is increasing due to humans’ destructive activities including cutting massive areas of tropical forests and poaching. This disruption of nature may lead humans in trouble situations all around the world as soon as we expected. With the cooperation of all sections of society and, of course, the support of governments, these issues and concerns will be resolved.
- Differences between countries become less evident each year Nowadays all over the world people share the same fashions advertising brands eating habits and TV channels 84
- Many criminals re offend after they have been punished Why do some people continue to commit crimes after they have been punished and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem 78
- With deforestation urban development and illegal hunting many animal species are becoming endangered as they lose their habitat and some are even threatened to the point of extinction Do you think it is important to protect animals what measures can be ta 89
- Many people say that the only way to guarantee getting a good job is to complete a course of university education Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work How far do you agree or disagree with the 89
- In many countries an increase in crime has been blamed on violent images on television and in computer and video games To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, well, for instance, in short, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2075.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56300268097 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33010838588 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613941018767 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 652.5 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 8.0 0.809619238477 988% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.9298839225 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.214285714 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6428571429 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137388984777 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431052986844 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396309560933 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0751335340243 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486152818821 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.