Despite a large number of gyms, a sedentary lifestyle is gaining popularity in the contemporary world.
What problems are associated with this?
What solutions can you suggest?
Nowadays, people keep themself in-between four walls of the house instead of going out for the gym and walking. this essay will discuss health issues and poor social life-style which are common and suggest the possible solution to combat these such as workout and maintain a social life.
There is no exaggeration to say that people are suffering from terrible health-related problems and worse social life-style. Due to a hectic work hours schedule, People are not getting time for exercise, walking, cycling and they spend most of the time in front of the computer. As a result, people are going through obesity, poor vision and many more illnesses. In leisure time, today's generation waste their time playing video games, watching movies. Therefore, they almost cut-down their link with society. According to a research paper, people are becoming more isolating and this number will grow dramatically in the future.
There are some solutions such as regular workout and maintaining a social lifestyle can be vital remedies for these problems. After working hours, going to the gym, performing yoga, meditation, walking can improve a health system rapidly because these improve the blood circulation of the body which makes people fit. For example, the world is highly conscious about health and they more concentrated towards it. People celebrate yoga day worldwide which depicts inclination toward health. What is more, People should go out into parks, community centres, so they will be socialized. As such, they feel relaxed and enthusiastic after busy working hours.
In conclusion, leading sedentary habits give birth to numerous problems related to health and social life as well. However, proper balance in life in-term of regular exercise or outgoing can bring major changes in life. The Government should promote more and more programmes and make some rules toward job scenario.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 113, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54963178169 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633333333333 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0486562438 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4705882353 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6470588235 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0964992691889 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0291383819533 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0294313855116 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.05565984503 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0111336776157 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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