Portables devices have made it possible to work from home. Some people are in favour of this development wheras others have alternative views. In this essay, I will illustrate pros and cons of telecommuting with my objectivity.
To begin with, work from home, once a desirable thought of employees has become a reality in the modern world. Numerous benefits of it make it a popular choice these days. First and foremost importance lies in the fact that it provides flexibility in the working schedule. One doesnot need to follow a strict 9.00 am to 5.00 pm routine. Person can decide his working hours. Secondly, ommits the daily travel, especially, in metro cities daily commuters have to face lots of problems in the form of traffic jams and pollution. Facility to work from home can save them from this harrassment. Thirdly, it provides ample amount of time to the person to spend with family and nuture their children. As person remains at home, he can assit his partner in the home management.
On the flip side, working from home hampers the concentration of the person from the work. It is found that efficiency of the worker decreases when he tends to work from home. As, his mind is occupied by various other activities, he cannot devote himself properly to his job. Further, it disturbs the family balance. Stress of work makes the person self occupied all the time, deadlines of project add to his miseries. So, he could not be able to attend his family properly. Moreover, assistance of staff is not with him at home, whenever, he requires help he has to think alternatives for it which causes delay in his work.
In conclusion, after studying benefits and drawbacks, it is too early to adopt this culture. It cannot replace the office so for part time workers it may work, regular workers should attend the office, it will be beneficial for company as well as the employee.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 7, column 130, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...re. It cannot replace the office so for part time workers it may work, regular workers sh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, as to, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79816513761 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58399833332 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593272171254 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.00966916 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.7142857143 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5714285714 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38095238095 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274867599551 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921633797029 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119330825225 0.0667982634062 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155553802616 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799459025457 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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