Discuss both sides of Space travel vs. Current crucial problems faced by humans.
In recent years, there has been limitless upsurge in the ongoing detrimental facets over humans and as well as space explorations impacts be it an impoverished or affluent nation. In this essay, I will elaborate both escalating and plummeting facets towards space travel and present problems encountered by humans.
At the outset, there are myriad of benefits, firstly, in today’s advance technology, space travel made easier in studying the predict and drastic impacts effecting earth. For example, according to research, a study conducted by NASA team mitigating the effects of the cancer which made it possible by survey of positive benefits over health care, moreover, it also gave us outdo understanding over other impacts of temblor, global warming and climate changes, clearly, space travel explored on hand the adverse effects over surface of the earth.
Moreover, of having some benefits on space travel, there are crucial problems that arouse in today’s environment such as people are facing with upcoming problems in global warming. For instance, in most of the countries having enormous population growth resulting to increase expenditure cost, transportation increase; which are some of the major causes to effect the greenhouse gas emission and thus resulting the problems on human health, economic crisis, increase mortality rates. Apparently, it is imperative to accentuate to limit such crucial problems.
To recapitulate from the above aforementioned, one can conclude that despite of having a positive triumphant in the technology, but the upsides of negative impacts shall be considered to have greener vicinity in always and which are too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...y, space travel made easier in studying the predict and drastic impacts effecting earth. Fo...
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Line 5, column 335, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ost, transportation increase; which are some of the major causes to effect the greenhouse g...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, firstly, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55598455598 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90702054928 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625482625483 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.6451337218 49.4020404114 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 179.875 106.682146367 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.375 20.7667163134 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.875 7.06120827912 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194689227663 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916907090334 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.09085325446 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103810716897 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731592362214 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.9 13.0946893788 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.08 50.2224549098 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.56 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.02 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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